People who live in busy cities are in many ways at a disadvantage to those who live in rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
.Many
people
who live in bustling towns and urban areas are at a disadvantage to those who live in small villages and countryside areas. In this
essay, I will either agree or disagree with this
statement. Firstly
, I will discuss the benefits of finding work and health care whilst living in a city
. And secondly
, I will explore the positives, the social aspects of living in an urban area. In my opinion, one of the great advantages to
living in a Change preposition
of
city
is the economic benefits that it can bring. For example
, it is true that many large and wealthy businesses and corporations operate in large towns and cities. I just noticed I repeated a large in the same sentences try not to repeat vocabulary too often. For
this
reason, people
often find that they can gain employment a lot easier than they would if they lived in the countryside. Furthermore
, it is also
true that in a metropolitan area, people
have more access to health care and quality hospitals. In addition
to this
, the waiting hours are often much shorter as they are better staffed. Also
, I do feel that people
who reside in cities benefit from a more social and active lifestyle when living in small, isolated places. It is definitely more difficult to meet friends and visit restaurants or bars in big cities and towns due to
transport and availability of venues. It is quite easy to socialize and unwind. It may also
be that due to
being able to meet friends more frequently, city
dwellers might also
lead happier lives. In conclusion, the benefits of living in a city
are numerous from nightlife, friends, health care and better employment prospects. Therefore
, I believe that people
who live in city
areas are actually at an advantage to
those who do not.Change preposition
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion