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Nowadays it is seen that many students are part time employed. Discuss advantages and dis advantages?

#students #part #time #dis
Across
countries
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 it has been considered that the number of pupils
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 involved with work while they attend their educational institutions.discuss some benefits and a number of drawbacks
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this
 trend.
First
 and foremost , temporary working opportunities can lead to several positive sides for learners.
Firstly
, students remain pretty confident and street smart,
thus
become
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 independent early.
Secondly
,
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part
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part-time
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time
 working chances boost their work capacity
,
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makes them skilled, and at the same
time
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 it remains
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them
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experience
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.
As a result
, they are able to communicate with their
superior
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 and enable to collaborate with other members of staff when they get into
full
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time
 employment.
Finally
, they contribute to their
families
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 over on income which helps to improve their
will
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 being.
On the other hand
, beyond these obvious
benefits
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 it
also
 carries various distinct disadvantages. Most importantly,
such
 students
students
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are unable to concentrate on their academic subjects which
diminish
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 the opportunity to accomplish expected scores because they spend
considerable
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 proportion of
time
 at their workstation and they barely find any
time
 for
self study
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.
Moreover
, these young generations fall into a habit of making easy money which often distracted them from their principal aspirations. To sum up, despite the different views it can be said that that since
part
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time
 working opportunity help them to increase confidence but it is
sometime
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 enable them to devote completely to
educational
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the educational
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 program.
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