In may places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. what is your opinion about this?

Nowadays,
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population
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area
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need to be preserved and not to build new flats in these areas.I completely disagree with
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it will increase the
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help
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estate market.
firstly
, in
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, there are limited jobs and facilities.
Besides
that, big construction companies will involve in
this
development and they will provide more jobs in different fields.
for example
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industries
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different skills
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such
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masonry
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carpentry
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therefore
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of rural
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, will have jobs within walking distance.
Thus
,
people
no need to travel so far from their location.
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, high demand and
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places to live in
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area
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is responsible for
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inflation
in
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estate market. To illustrate, according to
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of 2011 in Toronto city, the average rent of houses was 1000 CAD per month, whereas in
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survey of 2020
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that
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rent is 2500 CAD . not only that but
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traffic
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traffic
problems are increasing.
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,
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is only
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option for new construction. To conclude,
this
development plays a paramount role to develop
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of rural areas.
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people
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accommodation
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accommodation
in their budget and can
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the inflation rate of housing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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