Many young people are motivated and successful at high school. Many others, however, lack motivation and see high school as irrelevant to their interests and needs. Why is this? What could be done to help all students succeed?

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and recognize their high schools as irrelevant to their interests and what they want. I suppose the cause of

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needed for gaining the right for entering

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for continuing to go

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motivation

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of high

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students

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to go their

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is so difficult. They hold a lot of

stress

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for their

future

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and

pressure

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from their

parents

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. If high

school

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has non-academic

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, it will relieve the difficult

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and be

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school

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students

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have

strong

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motivation

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to their

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and gain success in

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life.

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, there are

students

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who cannot have plenty of

motivation

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and recognize their high schools as irrelevant to their interests and what they want. I suppose the cause of

this

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situation

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is

a

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the

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pressure

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of study and

future

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.

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, I believe that

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the

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implementation

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of non-academic

classes

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at high

school

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will be a

solution

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to

this

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problem. When I think reasons of

depress

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depression

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and

low-

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low motivation

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motivation

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to

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in

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high

school

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, the reason might be the

pressure

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for

entrance

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the entrance

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exam

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of

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to

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university

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the university

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. Recently,

tendency

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the tendency

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of putting

value

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a value

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on

educational

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the educational

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background is notable in society. Of course, brilliant grades

is

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are

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needed for gaining the right for entering

high-level

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a high-level

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university

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. Many

of

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apply

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parents

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hopes

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their children

to

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apply

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pass the famous

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university’s

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university

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entering

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entrance

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exam

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.

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situation

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will

leads

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to

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apply

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excessive

pressure

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of

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on

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the

students

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. I believe that

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implementation

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of non-academic

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class

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in high

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might be a

solution

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to improve the

situation

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. As I wrote, adolescent

students

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need opportunities to escape from

daily

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the daily

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rush to relieve their

stress

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. Holding non-academic

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class

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is not only achieving

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to find

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that

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class

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with friends is meaningful for high-

school

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because it will be

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chance

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a chance

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to learn

building

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good

friendship

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and give

motivation

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for continuing to go

high

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to high

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school

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. In recent days, keeping

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motivation

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the motivation

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of high

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students

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to go their

school

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is so difficult. They hold a lot of

stress

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for their

future

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and

pressure

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from their

parents

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. If high

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has non-academic

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, it will relieve the difficult

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and be

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