Many young people are motivated and successful at high school. Many others, however, lack motivation and see high school as irrelevant to their interests and needs. Why is this? What could be done to help all students succeed?

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pressure

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background is notable in society. Of course, brilliant grades

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needed for gaining the right for entering

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excessive

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the

students

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in high

school

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solution

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situation

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rush to relieve their

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with friends is meaningful for high-

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because it will be

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to learn

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good

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and give

motivation

for continuing to go

high

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school

. In recent days, keeping

motivation

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the motivation

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of high

school

students

to go their

school

is so difficult. They hold a lot of

stress

for their

future

and

pressure

from their

parents

. If high

school

has non-academic

classes

, it will relieve the difficult

situation

and be

motivation

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a motivation

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of

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for

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students

.

school

students

have

strong

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a strong

show examples

motivation

to their

school

and gain success in

school

life.

On the other hand

, there are

students

who cannot have plenty of

motivation

and recognize their high schools as irrelevant to their interests and what they want. I suppose the cause of

this

situation

is

a

Correct article usage

the

show examples

pressure

of study and

future

.

Furthermore

, I believe that

a

Correct article usage

the

show examples

implementation

of non-academic

classes

at high

school

will be a

solution

to

this

problem. When I think reasons of

depress

Replace the word

depression

show examples

and

low-

Correct your spelling

low motivation

show examples

motivation

to

Change preposition

in

show examples

high

school

, the reason might be the

pressure

for

entrance

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the entrance

show examples

exam

of

Change preposition

to

show examples

university

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the university

show examples

. Recently,

tendency

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the tendency

show examples

of putting

value

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a value

show examples

on

educational

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the educational

show examples

background is notable in society. Of course, brilliant grades

is

Change the verb form

are

show examples

needed for gaining the right for entering

high-level

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a high-level

show examples

university

. Many

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

parents

hopes

Change the verb form

hope

show examples

their children

to

Fix the infinitive

apply

show examples

pass the famous

university’s

Change noun form

university

show examples

entering

Replace the word

entrance

show examples

exam

.

This

situation

will

leads

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lead

show examples

to

the

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apply

show examples

excessive

pressure

of

Change preposition

on

show examples

the

students

. I believe that

implementation

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the implementation

show examples

of non-academic

class

Fix the agreement mistake

classes

show examples

in high

school

might be a

solution

to improve the

situation

. As I wrote, adolescent

students

need opportunities to escape from

daily

Add an article

the daily

a daily

show examples

rush to relieve their

stress

. Holding non-academic

class

Fix the agreement mistake

classes

show examples

is not only achieving

this

aim

,

Add the word(s)

but,

show examples

also

a

chance

to find

interesting

Add an article

an interesting

the interesting

show examples

theme

Fix the agreement mistake

themes

show examples

that

relate

Change the verb form

relates

show examples

with

Change preposition

to

show examples

their

Change the word

the

show examples

future

for

student

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the student

show examples

.

Moreover

, enjoying music and arts in non-academic

class

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classes

show examples

with friends is meaningful for high-

school

student

Fix the agreement mistake

students

show examples

because it will be

chance

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a chance

show examples

to learn

building

Change the verb form

to build

show examples

good

friendship

Fix the agreement mistake

friendships

show examples

and give

motivation

for continuing to go

high

Change preposition

to high

show examples

school

. In recent days, keeping

motivation

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the motivation

show examples

of high

school

students

to go their

school

is so difficult. They hold a lot of

stress

for their

future

and

pressure

from their

parents

. If high

school

has non-academic

classes

, it will relieve the difficult

situation

and be

motivation

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a motivation

show examples

of

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for

show examples

students

.