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You are organizing a seminar for your company. Write a letter to the manager of another department inviting them to give a presentation at the seminar. In your letter, • give details of the seminar • invite them to give a presentation and say why you are inviting them • say what the presentation should be about You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

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Dear
Mr.
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 Andrew, My name is Harwinder Kaur, and I am working as a developer in an IT department. I am writing
this
 letter to invite you to present your thoughts on the
seminar
 which is being held
next
 week for our company. The
seminar
 is about the new website which our company is going to submit to the company at the end of the month. The
seminar
 is organized in the projector room for better screening, and it will start at 6 pm and will finish at 8 pm. As it is a prominent
project
, so we invite every department’s manager to give their view on
this
 final product.
Although
 the
project
 was difficult for us because of the inadequate time and budget provided by the client, our team managed to finish it before the deadline, and they fulfilled all the requirements which were provided to them prior to handling the
project
. So, as a senior and experienced executive, I want you to represent their work to all the audiences. The presentation would be about
this
 whole
project
.
Firstly
, you will explain how
this
 web application works, and which coding, and design they use to build it, how they overcome all the obstacles.
Further
, shed some light on their
team- work
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, collaboration,
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and decision
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decision making
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 skills which helps them to make
this
 web application successful. That would be all, from your side. I hope you will accept my invitation and join the
seminar
. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Harwinder Kaur.
Submitted by Harinder on

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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