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Because of improved technologies in communication and transport, people in some countries can now choose to live and work anywhere they want. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In
this
 current modern world, technologies in communication and transport have become essential,
thus
people
 in some countries can now choose to live and
work
 anywhere they want. In the essay, we will discuss
about
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the pros and cons of
this
 statement. Nowadays, with the progression of technology, many opportunities are being given to
people
 to
work
 anywhere they want. With
internet
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 and wifi,
people
 can choose the place they want to
work
. Due to the pandemic of covid-19, there was a complete lockdown. So,
people
 were able to continue business as usual with the help of wifi and they were even able to connect to the server of their company and
finally
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 they could complete their workloads on time.
Moreover
, many
companies
 provide laptops to their employees,
therefore
,these facilitate the workers. They can
work
 from home and even when they go on business trips, they are still able to connect to their e-mails.
In addition
, technologies in transport play an important role for many individuals and
companies
. Though
people
work
 very far from their
work
, with facilities like trams, metros and cars, they can access
to
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their
work place
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 rapidly.
In addition
,
companies
 can send their employees abroad to follow
trainings
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 or for meetings,
thus
, airlines provide
this
 advantage. In conclusion, the advantages of technology in communication and transportation are more significant than
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drawbacks. In my opinion, these progressions are facilitating the life of many employees and
also
companies
 are satisfied as there is continuity of their business in all circumstances.
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