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Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about the right and wrong. Other people consider the main responsibility of the parent is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Over the past few decades, the families at large have witnessed issues with regard to effective Parenting.It may not be a hyperbole to suggest that the deficiency in proper awareness has been a core element and an inviolable subset in
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 matrix of progress.In
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. In the arsenal of arguments , supporting some people's perspective that Parents are to discipline their
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,one of the most potent is that Parents have the right and responsibility to correct their behaviour and the
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 would never feel anything bad to them as it's a practice of Parenting.The proponents
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 state that home is the best place for providing the best discipline .
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frank analysis of
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 situation would make us realise that the above-mentioned argument is completely an archaic type which not only ignores the dynamics of the modern cosmopolitan world
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account the progress that we have achieved as human beings.The wheels of the world and
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 would come to a halt if we accept
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 puritanical arguments .Certain compromises are inevitable and indispensable for the seamless functioning of the family as well as the system.At
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 point, it's high time to realise that the above-mentioned arguments are not practical and any argument that
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 not tenable. A quick perusal of the issue at hand would throw up a surfeit of seminal reasons supporting my perspective of liberal Parenting.
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 has to be respected .Parents shouldn't be a burden for them while they are brought up especially,
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 skills, and interests have to be taken into consideration.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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