You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Reham and I work in the advertising department. I am writing
this
letter to ask you I you would give me the chance to an internal
office
in Dubai.
Firstly
, I would join the training which will be in the head
office
. It will start
next
month and continue for 3 months. I suppose it will be a great opportunity to enhance my skills.
Secondly
, I think
this
training will be beneficial to our
office
to improve our manner in the work and
that is
mean, we will make numerous profit. During my absence, I will give hand over to my colleague at our
office
and follow up with him.
In addition
, I will arrange a weekly online meeting to acknowledge the updates and solve any problems that might appear. I have confidence that
,
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my colleague will handle all work. would you kindly help me in the arrangement for the transfer process and acceptance from the head
office
.
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Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • global operations
  • cross-functional
  • remote work
  • progress updates
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural exchange
  • continuity plan
  • enhance my skillset
  • broaden my horizons
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