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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

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Nowadays, it is so common that many
graduates
 who had highly qualified don't have
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job
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. There are many factors
can
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 contribute to
this
 phenomenon.
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first
 reason is about salary and welfare, people try their best to have access
into
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 a famous university because they predict to receive higher income with better welfare.
For example
, if I graduated from a
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brilliant
brillant
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 school,
this
 means that I got more opportunities to be recruited by some well-known corporations. Gaining the offers from companies shows that I may experience comfortable surroundings and facilities in
office
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.
However
, if the conditions of companies don't meet the needs of intelligent
graduates
, they would rather keep waiting for
a
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new and suitable work and
then
 reject the offers.
On the other hand
, there is a
second
 factor that the unemployment rate
regarding
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 highly qualified
graduates
 is increasing. Some
graduates
 are super smart and talented, they choose to establish their own corporation
instead
 of working for others. It is so common in our generation that young people are willing to try and face all the difficulties, one of the reasons is that the wage is less than their expectations.
In addition
,
graduates
 who owned the business had more freedom, and they can manage their time well.
As a result
, there are growing populations attempting to create their own business
instead
 of being an employee in
company
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. In conclusion, I consider there are too many factors
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 to the high unemployment rate of young people,
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especially
espeacially
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especially
 for highly qualified
graduates
.
Nevertheless
, in my
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opinion
opioin
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opinion
, we should address the roots of the lower wage and
surroundings
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the surroundings
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 of
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companies
comanies
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companies
.
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