In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Nowadays, it is so common that many

graduates

who had highly qualified don't have

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job

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. There are many factors

can

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contribute to

this

phenomenon.

For the

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first

reason is about salary and welfare, people try their best to have access

into

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a famous university because they predict to receive higher income with better welfare.

For example

, if I graduated from a

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brilliant

brillant

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brilliant

school,

this

means that I got more opportunities to be recruited by some well-known corporations. Gaining the offers from companies shows that I may experience comfortable surroundings and facilities in

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.

However

, if the conditions of companies don't meet the needs of intelligent

graduates

, they would rather keep waiting for

a

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new and suitable work and

then

reject the offers.

On the other hand

, there is a

second

factor that the unemployment rate

regarding

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highly qualified

graduates

is increasing. Some

graduates

are super smart and talented, they choose to establish their own corporation

instead

of working for others. It is so common in our generation that young people are willing to try and face all the difficulties, one of the reasons is that the wage is less than their expectations.

In addition

,

graduates

who owned the business had more freedom, and they can manage their time well.

As a result

, there are growing populations attempting to create their own business

instead

of being an employee in

company

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. In conclusion, I consider there are too many factors

contribute

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to the high unemployment rate of young people,

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especially

espeacially

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especially

for highly qualified

graduates

.

Nevertheless

, in my

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opinion

opioin

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opinion

, we should address the roots of the lower wage and

surroundings

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the surroundings

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of

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companies

comanies

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companies

.