You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write a letter to the tourist information office. In your letter: -Explain what you need -Say when you plan to be there -Ask for information about prices

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inquire about a few things about the pricing structure for renting an apartment for one or two weeks. Actually, my company is giving me 2 weeks off, so I was thinking

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some days in Singapore with my family. Basically, I will be coming with my wife and two kids and I want one room with two double beds.

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, I want the hotel to be close to one of the best tourist places in Singapore because we do not want to book a cab on a daily basis.

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, the hotel room should have a private swimming pool, as my children love to swim. I want them to enjoy it as much as they can. Hopefully, we

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be there in the

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of October, but I'll confirm the dates with you soon. Now, I want to ask you about the prices of

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hotels where our requirements can be fulfilled. If you can give me an idea as per the time I have suggested that would really help me in planning my vacations. Looking forward to hearing from you soon Yours Sincerely, Shikha

shikha_dhingraSat Sep 17 2022

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task response

Ensure that your letter fully addresses all the points mentioned in the prompt, including specific requests for information about prices and the desired duration of stay.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate, but consider using a slightly more formal salutation and closing for a business letter, (e.g., Dear Sir/Madam, Yours faithfully). Additionally, aim to maintain consistent formality throughout the letter.

coherence cohesion

Your ideas are presented logically and each paragraph contains a single main idea. However, consider using more transitional phrases to create smoother connections between sentences and paragraphs.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

194 words

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You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write a letter to the tourist information office. In your letter: -Explain what you need -Say when you plan to be there -Ask for information about prices

Some people believe that in order to give opportunities to new generation, companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree? Why.

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

Some people think that healthcare should be free for everyone; other things that people should pay for their medical cost themselves discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some say that reading newspapers and watching TV news is a waste of time , because it has no direct connection with people's lives . To what extent do you agree or disagree ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience .