You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write a letter to the tourist information office. In your letter: -Explain what you need -Say when you plan to be there -Ask for information about prices

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inquire about a few things about the pricing structure for renting an apartment for one or two weeks. Actually, my company is giving me 2 weeks off, so I was thinking

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some days in Singapore with my family. Basically, I will be coming with my wife and two kids and I want one room with two double beds.

Also

, I want the hotel to be close to one of the best tourist places in Singapore because we do not want to book a cab on a daily basis.

Moreover

, the hotel room should have a private swimming pool, as my children love to swim. I want them to enjoy it as much as they can. Hopefully, we

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be there in the

mid

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of October, but I'll confirm the dates with you soon. Now, I want to ask you about the prices of

such

hotels where our requirements can be fulfilled. If you can give me an idea as per the time I have suggested that would really help me in planning my vacations. Looking forward to hearing from you soon Yours Sincerely, Shikha

Submitted by shikha_dhingra on Sat Sep 17 2022

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task response

Ensure that your letter fully addresses all the points mentioned in the prompt, including specific requests for information about prices and the desired duration of stay.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate, but consider using a slightly more formal salutation and closing for a business letter, (e.g., Dear Sir/Madam, Yours faithfully). Additionally, aim to maintain consistent formality throughout the letter.

coherence cohesion

Your ideas are presented logically and each paragraph contains a single main idea. However, consider using more transitional phrases to create smoother connections between sentences and paragraphs.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

194 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write a letter to the tourist information office. In your letter: -Explain what you need -Say when you plan to be there -Ask for information about prices

Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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