Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to leam how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many people think that families have to motivate their

kids

to participate in several

activities

in their free

time

. While others claim that the youngsters should choose by themselves what to do in

this

time

. I consider that the

parents

should decide for their offspring what to do in their leisure

time

for several reasons. On the one hand, those who claim that children should decide how they spent their free

time

teach them how to be decision makers from a young age. Because if the

kids

learned to take decisions at an early stage of their lives, they would be successful adults.

Moreover

, they believe that children's preferences are different, so they should choose according to what they like the most without any obligation.

For instance

, in Japan, the students choose the type of activity they want to participate in, which resulted in successful adults in several fields.

On the other hand

, I believe that

parents

should pester their offspring to be a

part

of

activities

groups in their vacant

time

for several reasons.

Firstly

, the infants are young and not able to choose what is best for them and their future as they lack the experience and the knowledge, that's why

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the

parents

should encourage them.

Secondly

, being a

part

of a group will develop the kid's intellectual, learning, and social skills which will enhance their

characters

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and way of thinking eventually.

Finally

,

kids

mimic each other,

hence

being a

part

of a group will teach them discipline and improve their attitudes faster than being alone.

For example

, in ,Sweden they make group

activities

in summer where all the

kids

take

part

, which results in enhancing their skills of all of them. In conclusion, I hold the notion that when the

parents

direct their children to do

activities

in systemized groups is better than letting them decide how they spend

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time

. Because

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they will choose the best for their infants,

in addition

to developing various skills,

furthermore

, they will motivate each other when being in groups.