Many people today choose to move from rural areas to cities in search of better opportunities. Does this have more advantages or disadvantages for a country?

Nowadays, many people tend to decide to go to urban

areas

from the

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to seek opportunities to work in a better environment. In

this

essay, I will discuss the impact of

this

trend. Personally,

this

trend has a bad effect on a

country

. Urban

areas

are damaged by an excessive concentration of

population

.

For instance

, people are struggling to find a house to live in, and the prices and the rent remain greatly expensive. Especially in developing countries, these situations lead to the structuring

a

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slum community. The government will have difficulty

to improve

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the situation of slum communities that have many troubles,

for example

, increasing violent crime, lack of infrastructure, and infection of diseases.

Furthermore

, tons of carbon are emitted from dense urban

areas

make

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the effect of global warming worse.

Countrysides

also

have difficulties.

Firstly

, because of the lack of

labor

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and brain drain, agriculture, fishing, and

farming

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industry which are the main sources of income will constantly shrink. It causes a drop

of

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food self-sufficiency rates and

country

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cannot store

an

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enough amount of food for an emergency

of

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the

country

.

Secondly

, the disparity between rural

areas

and cities will be

more and more wider

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.

As a result

,

this

situation increases the number

of

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population

that

has

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the willingness

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willingness

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to move to urban

areas

, and

this

cycle cannot be stopped. To conclude, the tendency of people to move to urban

areas

from

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countrysides

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is notable in recent years. But, urban

areas

have many troubles,

for instance

, shortage of houses, building slum communities and escalating global warming.

Also

,

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countrysides

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struggles

in

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shrinking

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a shrinking

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industry,

disparity

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with urban

areas

and an endless cycle of

the

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decreasing

of

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population

. Because these situations

makes

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more disadvantages for

country

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the country

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,

government

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the government

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should make

policy

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policies

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to limit

moving

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the moving

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population

to cities.