Many people today choose to move from rural areas to cities in search of better opportunities. Does this have more advantages or disadvantages for a country?

Nowadays, many people tend to decide to go to urban

areas

from

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countrysides

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to seek opportunities to work in a better environment. In

this

essay, I will discuss the impact of

this

trend. Personally,

this

trend has

the

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bad effect

for

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a

country

. Urban

areas

are damaged by an excessive concentration of

population

.

For instance

, people are struggling to find a house to live in, and the prices and the rent remain greatly expensive. Especially in developing countries, these situations lead to the structuring

the

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slum community. The government will have difficulty

to improve

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the situation of slum communities that have many troubles,

for example

, increasing violent crime, lack of infrastructure, and infection of diseases.

Furthermore

, tons of carbon are emitted from dense urban

areas

make

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the effect of global warming worse. Countrysides

also

have difficulties.

Firstly

, because of the lack of

labor

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and brain drain, agriculture, fishing, and farming industry which are main sources of income will constantly shrink. It causes a drop

of

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food self-sufficiency rates and

country

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cannot store

the

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enough amount of food for an emergency

of

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the

country

.

Secondly

, the disparity between rural

areas

and cities will be wider and wider.

As a result

,

this

situation increases the number

of

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population

that

has

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the willingness

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willingness

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to move to urban

areas

, and

this

cycle cannot be stopped. To conclude, the tendency of people to move to urban

areas

from

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the countrysides

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countrysides

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is notable in recent years

, .

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But, urban

areas

have many troubles,

for instance

, the shortage of houses and building slum communities.

Also

, rural

areas

struggle with a shrinking industry, the disparity with urban

areas

and the endless cycle of the decreasing

of

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population

. Because these situations make more disadvantages for

country

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, the government should make policies to limit the moving

population

to cities.