Many people today choose to move from rural areas to cities in search of better opportunities. Does this have more advantages or disadvantages for a country?

Nowadays, many people tend to decide to go to urban

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to seek opportunities to work in a better environment. In

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essay, I will discuss the impact of

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trend. Personally,

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trend has

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bad effect

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a

country

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. Urban

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are damaged by an excessive concentration of

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.

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, people are struggling to find a house to live in, and the prices and the rent remain greatly expensive. Especially in developing countries, these situations lead to the structuring

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slum community. The government will have difficulty

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the situation of slum communities that have many troubles,

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, increasing violent crime, lack of infrastructure, and infection of diseases.

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, tons of carbon are emitted from dense urban

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the effect of global warming worse. Countrysides

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have difficulties.

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, because of the lack of

labor

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and brain drain, agriculture, fishing, and farming industry which are main sources of income will constantly shrink. It causes a drop

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food self-sufficiency rates and

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country

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cannot store

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enough amount of food for an emergency

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country

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.

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, the disparity between rural

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and cities will be wider and wider.

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,

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situation increases the number

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population

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the willingness

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willingness

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to move to urban

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cycle cannot be stopped. To conclude, the tendency of people to move to urban

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the countrysides

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countrysides

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is notable in recent years

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But, urban

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have many troubles,

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, the shortage of houses and building slum communities.

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, rural

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struggle with a shrinking industry, the disparity with urban

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and the endless cycle of the decreasing

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population

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. Because these situations make more disadvantages for

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country

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, the government should make policies to limit the moving

population

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to cities.