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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is obvious, that information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates everywhere. Some
people
 are trying to think about the balance between advantages and
disadvandages
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disadvantages
 of using information technologies. But I guess, there
are
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 no
nessecety
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ness city
 to think about that, because it is clear, that without IT there are no ways to live.
First
 of all,
currently
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 IT
are
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 developing
with
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at
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the
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 huge speed. I assume, nowadays IT industry is the most powerful and
the
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most popular sphere of our life. Without IT there are no possibilities to live today, because the majority of things we use in our ordinary life
is
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are
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 connected to
Internet
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the Internet
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, IT and technologies.
Moreover
, with the help of
IT
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people
 can discover a lot of incredible things. Science and Medicine are
a
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high-technological industries. Scientists without
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access
acsess
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access
 to modern IT will be not able to heal
people
 and make valuable discoveries.
In addition
, IT helps
people
 with education. It is so important to be educated at present. And
that is
 so great, that nowadays with IT support
people
 can do all educational activities
remote
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. You can learn whatever you want from different places on
the
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Earth. No limits, no restrictions - only internet connection and apps needed. And for all of
that
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 we should say "thank you" to
IT
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the IT
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 industry. To sum up, I would like to say, that the only problem with IT for me is the fact, that I am not
IT-guy
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IT guy
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. Because
IT-guys
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IT guys
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 have the best perspectives today. They have high salaries,
ability
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the ability
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 to travel, demand and
the
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most important, they have
ability
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the ability
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 to do our world better and better
everyday
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every day
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.
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