Some people today believe that it is acceptable to use physical force to discipline children, but others feel it is completely unacceptable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Parents believe that
discipline
is most important to the development of Use synonyms
children
. Use synonyms
However
, opinions are divided on the Linking Words
use
of physical Use synonyms
force
to Use synonyms
discipline
Use synonyms
children
.
Voices in Use synonyms
favor
believe that the Change the spelling
favour
use
of physical Use synonyms
force
on Use synonyms
children
yields results quickly. Use synonyms
Its
basic human nature that if Correct your spelling
It's
by
doing something causes you Change preposition
apply
pain
, you may not do that again. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
also
applies to the Linking Words
use
of physical Use synonyms
force
to Use synonyms
discipline
Use synonyms
children
, because the Use synonyms
pain
caused by the physical Use synonyms
force
immediately imprints on the Use synonyms
child
's mind. Use synonyms
For instance
, if a Linking Words
child
is caught stealing and by the Use synonyms
use
of physical Use synonyms
force
, would immediately imprint on Use synonyms
to
his or her mind that stealing is bad and if I do it again, I would be in Change preposition
apply
pain
again. The downside to Use synonyms
this
approach is that the Linking Words
child
may get hurt physically during the process.
Use synonyms
However
, those not in Linking Words
favor
believe that the mental damage Change the spelling
favour
Wrong verb form
caused
cause
by the Correct your spelling
caused
use
of physical Use synonyms
force
is much more severe. Trust issues develop between the Use synonyms
children
and the Use synonyms
guardian
. Use synonyms
Children
no longer share their problems with their guardians because the fear of persecution drives them away. Use synonyms
For instance
, a Linking Words
child
being bullied at school will not share that experience with their Use synonyms
guardian
, because the Use synonyms
guardian
may Use synonyms
use
physical Use synonyms
force
. Use synonyms
This
fear Linking Words
also
Linking Words
create
future relationship issues between the Change the verb form
creates
guardian
and the Use synonyms
child
. Use synonyms
For example
, the Linking Words
child
may not longer feel compelled to visit and spend time with their parents, because the memory and Use synonyms
pain
of the physical Use synonyms
force
Use synonyms
is
still imprinted in their mind.
To conclude, Change the verb form
are
discipline
is important, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
we must Add a comma
,however
also
teach Linking Words
children
to respect their guardians. Use synonyms
Therefore
, in my Linking Words
opinion
the Add a comma
,opinion
use
of physical Use synonyms
force
is unwarranted. We must Use synonyms
use
alternative means to Use synonyms
discipline
Use synonyms
children
.Use synonyms
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