People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter, describe the problems explain how it is affecting people say what the company should do to help Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter on behalf of others to inform you that our community is facing an

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issue over the past few days. I tried to connect with the customer service desk several times but, unfortunately, no one responded.

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of all, I would like to thank you for providing the best

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services but, unfortunately, there is a sudden drop in

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speed .

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is an intermittent issue that usually occurs at peak times between 09:00 AM to 12:00 PM. We tried our best to restore the services by performing basic troubleshooting steps but, no luck. Slow

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is affecting many people in my area; both students and working professional. Students are unable to take online morning classes due to slow

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speed while employees fail to join critical client meetings which sometimes is very embarassing for them. I request you to please look into

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matter on urgent basis as

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. It would appreciate if you could send an Service Engineer on site who can fix

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problem. I look forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully, Ishant Kesar

Submitted by ishantkesar on Sun Sep 18 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

189 words

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