A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties

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Dear Clair, Hope you are doing great! Thank you for agreeing to look after my house and my pet for a while. I owe you a big one. During my holiday I will be staying with my family in our apartment in Bandung. If you need anything, feel free to contact me by email, mobile phone or my social media. As for

Ian

, the goldfish, she doesn’t really need much care, because she can live in water temperatures. You just have to clear the aquarium two days once and feed her one time a day.

This

is important when you are feeding

Ian

, you might not know fish don’t have stomachs, so they never know when to stop eating.

Therefore

, make sure you don’t overfeed,

Ian

is a goldfish so you should only be fed as much as

ian

can eat in one minute. Since I go on holiday for a while, can you help me to care for my house, like cleaning the floor and opening windows for better air circulation

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Thank you so much for helping me. Can't wait to see you soon! With love, Jeny Devina

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