You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When you will pay the rent.

Dear John, It has been

such

a long time since we spoke. I hope

this

letter finds you in good health. I am writing here to let you know that currently, I am having some financial issues, because I didn't get my salary for

this

month as I am on notice period with my organization, so it is their norm to not release my salary for 2 months.

Thus

, I need an extension to pay the rent. I hope you'll understand and allow me to live here if possible.

However

, I am about to lend some money from one of my good friends. He is abroad for a few days, once he is back and gets some money from him I'll make sure that you received your rent as soon as possible. Hopefully, in the

1-2 weeks, I'll pay you the rent. Looking forward to your positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

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