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At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people.

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Nowadays, the
most
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population of many countries are
the
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young
matures
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 and a small
amount
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 of
people
 are old. In
this
 essay, I will explain
about
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the advantages and disadvantages and
obviously
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 benefits overweigh
drawbacks
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. The
first
 and significant advantage is that lots of sections and parts in companies and factories need the young as their employees because young
people
 can manage and handle tasks much better than others. I mean, they have more energy.
also
, they have
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 ability to work for long hours each day.
Moreover
, they have a great sense of creativity so they can help society improve in every field. The
second
 positive aspect is that breeding can happen between the age of 20-40 and elder
people
 are not able to have a baby so we need young
people
 to have more children and teenagers who could change the future.
Furthermore
,
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instance
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, an old
women
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does
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 not have enough
patient
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 and physical ability
for
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 growing a child.
On the other hand
, there is a negative aspect
for
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 it and it is that we always need the old.
for example
, grandparents are a good source of experiences during our lives and we will be in a safe hand
by
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 their existence.They have a helping hand whenever we are in need. As an example,you can count on them in looking after your children.
Also
, they often learn us how to be more tolerant and patient in life’s ups and downs. To sum up, having a large
amount
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 of young adults in a country has more benefits in comparison to the old. It can make
the
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society’s situation perfect and could be beneficial for all
people
.
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