You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take
Dear Mr. James and Mrs. Sally, I am writing
this
e-mail with the intent of notify
you, and the school, about my decision Change the verb form
notifying
of leaving
the business course. As I mentioned early Change preposition
to leave
this
year, I've been emplyed
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employed
full time
in a restaurant in Perth. From the very beginning up Add a hyphen
full-time
untill
now, I have been able to manage my shift according Correct your spelling
until
with
the school hours. Change preposition
to
However
, due to
the shortage of staff, I was asked to cover all the night shift
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shifts
through out
the week. Unfortunately, my new rostered hours are going to take time from my study Correct your spelling
throughout
therefore
, I am looking in to suspend my course with Add the comma(s)
, therefore
immendiate
effect. Going through the school policies I read that fees could be Correct your spelling
immediate
refound
with Verb problem
refunded
tree
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three
weeks
notice. As I anticipated the fee for the coming trimester, I was Change noun form
weeks'
week's
wandering
if it is possible to be Correct your spelling
wondering
reinbourse
. Correct your spelling
reimbursed
reimburse
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Looking
Loolking
forward to hearing from you, Kind regards JessCorrect your spelling
Looking
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.