You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear
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James and
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Sally, I am writing
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e-mail with the intent of
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you, and the school, about my decision of leaving the business course. As I mentioned early
this
year, I've been
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employed
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employed
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in a restaurant in Perth. From the very beginning up
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until
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until
now, I have been able to manage my shift according
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the
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school hours.
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, due to the shortage of staff, I was asked to cover all the night
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the week. Unfortunately, my new rostered hours are going to take time from my study
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to suspend my course with
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immediate
effect. Going through the school policies I read that fees could be refound with
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weeks
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notice. As I anticipated the fee for the coming trimester, I was
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if it is possible to be
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reimbursed
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Looking
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Looking
forward to hearing from you, Kind regards Jess
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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