Some people feels that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conslusion.

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It is thought that boarding schools provide more
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for students, yet,
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piece of mind. I am strongly in favour of boarding schools. On the one hand, boarding school is an
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has younger siblings, they can disturb, shout and laugh at home. Undoubtedly, it is not the best condition for studying, for the reason that teenager is not focused and concentrated.
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, in the boarding
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everyone is studying, it is not only creating the best atmosphere
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but indeed,
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roommates.
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, it is not always convenient for moving, since a taxi is expensive, and buses are often full.
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boarding school can hurt
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mental health, for many reasons:
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does not see his parents,
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can not share his worries and troubles. In my point of view, parents
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age are the most reliable and obvious support.
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age students are not ready for an independent life, without adults. Cooking, studying, washing,
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really hard work,
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must have
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and a lot of power. To sum up, I would like to reiterate, that boarding school is a key to
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future.
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