environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Protection

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The protection

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of the

environment

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has been highlighted as a matter of urgent public concern. While

people

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maintain that protecting the

environment

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is

responsible

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the responsible

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for

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of

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the government not

for

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of

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citizens

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. As far as I am concerned, I am supportive of the argument that governments and

citizens

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should be jointly responsible for environmental protection. The

first

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major responsibility

associated

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is associated

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with politicians because they have a huge impact

for

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on

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everyone. It is no exaggeration to say that

people

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who are in the public council should launch campaigns in raising

people

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’s awareness of the seriousness of

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preserving

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reserving

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preserving

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the

environment

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.

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, there are some lessons on “how important the

environment

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is” or some activities - “ green day” - planting more trees.

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,

besides

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raising awareness of

citizens

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laws should be set out not only to regulate corporation behaviours but

also

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make

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to make

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their operations more environmentally friendly.

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, if we don't put away trash in the correct places,

people

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have to be punished

by

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with

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money.

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, politicians have to have more notice

about

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of

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this

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problem and be a mirror for everyone. Following

this

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,

people

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who live in a country or city should be responsible too.

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, they should have a notification about their actions.

People

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have to save water or light when they do not use them.

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, they pay more attention to environmentally friendly goods and change their habits - planting more trees,

participating

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and participating

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in events about protecting the

environment

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.

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they just contribute a little but just imagining that much little collapse

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will have a huge impact

for

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on

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their habitat. In conclusion, from what has been discussed, it is necessary to reaffirm the writer’s position that it is not true if it is just the responsibility of the government. It might lead to

inefficient

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an inefficient

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impact. Tackling

this

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problem requires the commitment of both politicians and

citizens

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.