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Now a day the surveillance is happening at almost all public places. Is it good or perceived bad by people? What are advantages and disadvantages?

#surveillance #places #people
surveillance public
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crime
rate
reduce
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, mostly all public
places
 are being monitored with specialized cameras and people's activities
tracked
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. Just as every coin has a flip side
the
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surveillance brings both positive as well as negative
impact
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 on our life. I would discuss both the pros and cons of
this
 concept but
however
,
I
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educidate
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elucidate
educate
 that
advantages
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the advantages
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 on any
days
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 outweigh
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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. Surveillance has myriad merits. The
first
 and predominant one is the reduction
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crime
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rate
.
In other words
, the
crime
rate
 has
been
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significantly decreased especially in public
places
 in the
last
 few years. At initial, the crimes
for example
 murders,
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shoplifting
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shop lifting
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, robberies,
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burgulary
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burglary
 etc were difficult to track and criminals always had a way to escape and they are not shy away
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committing
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commiting
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committing
 a
crime
. Now, the situation has changed, everybody is being monitored properly by police to reduce the
crime
rate
. To exemplify
this
 point, I would quote an example of Mumbai's terrorist attack in 1993 that killed thousands of people and every attack was on public
places
such
 as
train
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, parks, and markets. If those
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