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the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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waste
produsing
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producing
 by 3 companies. Starting with
company
 A we can see that the
waste
 production ratio for that
company
 was the highest from 2000 to 2010.
However
, the main trend for A
company
 is that the
level
 of pollution went down
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smoothly
smoothely
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smoothly
. The top
point
 of
waste
producing
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 was in 2000. And the lowest
point
 was in 2015. As for the B
company
, they had a completely different way of changing. In 2000 they were
on
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the
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2nd place
on
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 producing
waste
. And there was a growing trend from 2000 to 2005 with the highest
point
 of
waste
 producing in 2005. And
then
 the picture changed.
Level
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 of pollution went down rapidly from 2005 to 2015. With the lowest
point
 in 2015. And the latest -
Company
 C. They had the lowest
level
 of
waste
production
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products
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 in the
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beginning
beggining
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beginning
. But there was a stable growing trend for them from 2000 to 2015. And in 2015 they had the highest
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pollution
evolution
polution
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pollution
level
.
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