Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that many artificial juices and snacks contain a huge amount of sugar in it, which ultimately leads to various

health

disorders. I agree with the statement that

such

high-calorie products should be made out of reach of the general public to improve their

health

. These high-sugar food products have a number of disastrous effects on

health

.

Firstly

, they

cause

poor dental hygiene because they contain carbonic acid and

this

erodes the protective calcium barrier of the teeth.

Secondly

, these sugary beverages are a leading

cause

of diabetes. They

cause

disruption in the utilization of insulin and

cause

insulin resistance which leads to type 2 diabetes.

For example

, a lot of my immediate family members suffer from

this

disease because of poor dietary habits.

Finally

, these high-calorie snacks lead to Obesity, which causes other long-term

health

problems,

such

as heart

diseases

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physical and mental

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. The government should take various steps to discourage the public from using these high-calorie drinks and foodstuff which have no real nutritional benefit. The officials could increase the tax on

such

items to reduce their intake. They could run general awareness campaigns to spread awareness among the common people.

For instance

, they could use social media, YouTube videos and articles. The ruling offices could ensure that restaurants provide alternatives to these beverages.

For example

, they could replace juice and fizzy drinks with water or flavoured water. In conclusion, I would like to say that the Government should hike the prices of manufactured snacks with an excess of sugar and calories to encourage the population to stop their use.