The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The research above outlines the distribution of
population
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age
groups
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in Italy and Yemen in the year
of
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2000
as well as
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a prediction
how
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the situation will change by 2050.
Researches
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divide the
population
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in
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3
groups
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: 0-14 years old(hereafter y.o.), 15-59 y.o., 60+ y.o. The shares or age
groups
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vary a lot between the countries in the
study
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and there are no obvious similarities, so let me walk you
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. At the beginning of
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study
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there is almost a parity between
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groups
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of 15-59 y.o. gnd 0-14 y.o. (46.3% and 50.1% respectively) and it changes with a drop to 37.0% for the latter group by 2050. The 60+ y.o. group is expected to steadily grow
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from 3.6% to 5.7% over the 50 years period of
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. Italy starts the
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with
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% share of 0-14 y.o., 61.6% of 15-59 y.o. and 24.1% of 60+ y.o. The research outlines a prediction that
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population
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the population
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of Ityle will get older by 2050 and end up with over 40% of
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population
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the population
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being 60+ years old. At the same
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there will
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be a little drop in the share of the younger
population
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(0-14 y.o.) to the point of 11.5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, groups, study with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "outlines" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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