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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The research above outlines the distribution of
population
 age
groups
 in Italy and Yemen in the year
of
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2000
as well as
 a prediction
how
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 the situation will change by 2050.
Researches
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 divide the
population
in
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 3
groups
: 0-14 years old(hereafter y.o.), 15-59 y.o., 60+ y.o. The shares or age
groups
 vary a lot between the countries in the
study
 and there are no obvious similarities, so let me walk you
through
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. At the beginning of
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study
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 there is almost a parity between
age
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groups
 of 15-59 y.o. gnd 0-14 y.o. (46.3% and 50.1% respectively) and it changes with a drop to 37.0% for the latter group by 2050. The 60+ y.o. group is expected to steadily grow
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from 3.6% to 5.7% over the 50 years period of
study
. Italy starts the
study
 with
14.3
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a 14.3
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% share of 0-14 y.o., 61.6% of 15-59 y.o. and 24.1% of 60+ y.o. The research outlines a prediction that
population
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 of Ityle will get older by 2050 and end up with over 40% of
population
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 being 60+ years old. At the same
time
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 there will
also
 be a little drop in the share of the younger
population
 (0-14 y.o.) to the point of 11.5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, groups, study with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "outlines" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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