You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time.in the letter you should say:   how you felt about the visit   refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her   invite your friend to visit you

Dear John,
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you are doing great. It's been
long
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we've
working
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around the clock
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and did not
got
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a chance to see each other for a long time. Taking about
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reminded me the
last
summer, when I came to visit you
India
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in India
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. It was
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amazing and enjoyable summer I ever had. Do you remember how we planned our ten days trip?Including
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treating
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breaking
, party,
seesighting
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see sighting
, etc. Well for me most enjoyable night was one we spent on Baga beach in Goa, how we were awake all night. We refreshed all our old memories of school while lying under
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. It was cold there and we arranged a bonfire
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and cooked
ourself
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instant noodles.
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I wish to rewind everything and enjoy
all
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it all
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again. Talking about which, why don't you plan you're winter holidays with me
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year. New year
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celebration
celebrations
are so
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wonderful
wonderfully
wonderfull
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wonderful
in Dubai. I will take care of your
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accommodation
accomodation
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accommodation
and travel. Hopefully will hear back soon from you. Kanchan
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