Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Abortion
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is always a sensitive topic for every country, especially the country that the religion is important as
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as the law. Some people believe that
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is nothing but
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decision while some people respect the
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on
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women
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's bodies.
This
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should be legal. Somehow the greatest responsibility is responsible
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the things we have done, but
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is not
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the list of
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responsibilities
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.
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, people may enjoy having sex without protection but
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keeping
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the baby, they
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decide
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decide
to have
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abortion
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an abortion
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to push their
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aways
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away
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.
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,
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is the worst sin in
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the country
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country
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countries
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that
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religion is
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a stick
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and significant like Thailand and
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Philippines
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, where
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religion is glorious. From my point of view, we couldn't say that the termination of pregnancy is
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immoral responsibility when many
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researches
research
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show that there are many
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problem
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problems
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come
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that come
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after unintentional pregnancy.
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as
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physical health and mental health
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problem
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problems
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after
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an
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and
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illegal
abortion
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, unqualified population, the violence in
family
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the family
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, etc.
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,
women
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should have the
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rights
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right
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on
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to
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their bodies, not anyone else.
Women
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's
right
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are important
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same as human
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. In conclusion, I definitely agree that
abortion
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should be legal because it is the right thing to do to support
women
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's
rights
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and it can prevent the
problem
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that could come after an illegal
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.
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, under the law that
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was legal, the individuals who think that
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is not
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thing to do still can take their own decision not to have an
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. It is human
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rights
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.
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