Recently saw an advertisement local news paper having some vacancies in a supermarket. Write a letter to the recruiting officer in your later Post for which you are applying Give details about your experience. Why you ant to get this job.

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Dear Mr John, I am writing

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letter to express my interest

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the

job

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vacancy in the Coles supermarket at C.B.D centre in Sydney which was advertised in yesterday’s newspaper. I would like to apply for the full-time position of counter-head at the supermarket as my past experience is in

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similar kind of

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role. I have worked as a front-line staff at the Novotel hotel which involves greeting and welcoming the customers, making reservations and handling the cash.

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to my previous

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experience

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I have a total of three years of work experience as a cashier at a regional bank in Melbourne. As you are aware of the lockdown situations in Sydney and due to the downfall in the hotel industry the management decided to

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the business

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thus

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, I am looking for another

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to support myself and my family financially and I am sure that I will be the best suitable person for

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role to give my best effort. I look forward to

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from you soon. Regards Santosh

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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