Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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ambitions other than
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visiting or doing a
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another
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, while others argued that there are many reasons for
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I will discuss both sides and give my reasons why
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I agree with
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part of
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. On the one hand,
people
tend to believe that the only factor for doing a foreign
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linguistic
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course is to migrate or find a foreign
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job
.
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they have to show their
language
ability when they are applying for a foreign
job
or visa.
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such
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as doctors, nurses and
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have to pass IELTS or OET exam to get their
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registrants
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in relevant bodies in the countries, where they wish to move.
Further
, some countries
such
as France, Sweden and
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East seek the
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skill of their visa
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taking their final
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.
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, it is fair to think by
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that it is the only object for following
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another
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, others think apart from the aforesaid purpose,
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can do
this
as a hobby or improve their knowledge. Currently, there are many bilingual persons
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all over the world but they do it as
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fun. In fact, the
people
in England follow many Spanish and French
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linguistic
linguistics
courses,
although
they do not need to show their
language
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for visa and
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application
appllycation
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applications
.
Furthermore
, there are many valuable books were written
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language
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, many
people
try to learn these languages which are
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the books. So, travelling and working purposes are not the only reason for learning
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. In conclusion,
although
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globetrotting
and working and working in a foreign country,
people
can enjoy and improve their knowledge by doing
language
learning course.
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