An organisation has given an advertisement for part time volunteering job for local children. Write a letter to the administrator of the organisation in your letter introduce yourself Why you think you are suitable for this. Job State when you will be able to join

Dear Mr John, I am writing
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the volunteer work which you have advertised in the local newspaper. I’m happy to share my details so that you can make a team according to
the
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needs. I’m Santosh Srinivas who is 20 years old doing my
Bachelors
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of Computers at the Perth
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University and
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in the volunteer programs related to
university
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. I feel I will be
the
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suitable person for the job with
the
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previous experience at the “Childcare Foundation” which is a non-profit organisation and do free service jobs in collecting funds, giving seminars and organising stalls at the events. Because of my semester exams commencing
from
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next
week I will be busy preparing for my exams and will be available
in
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the
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from the
first
week of November, with the finish of exams I can participate more actively which helps to get a good break from
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college schedule. I look forward to
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from you soon. Regards Santosh.
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