A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

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Dear Edward, I am writing

this

letter to

enqury

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enquiry

about

few

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things before

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visiting

visting

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visiting

your country. France is a beautiful country and

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curiosity

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to know more about the place is high. My friends who have visited Paris often talk about the tasty food and the beautiful culture. Buying gifts is a difficult task for me, even for dear ones. So please advise on what sort of things you and your wife like to receive especially from Canada. I am buying for the kids marvel toys and video games as you have mentioned multiple times of their obsession with

marvel

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. There are tons of activities to do in a different country but kindly do let me know what have you planned for my visit. Is there any specific type of clothes should I wear? I would like to wear clothes according to the weather and culture as I don’t want to stand out. Now, there

are

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so many food

allergy

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that I have which is being treated.

Thus

, it’s important for me to know what

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kinds of food we will be eating during my visit. I am very excited to meet you and your family. See you soon! Sincerely, Rishi Jayakumar

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7 paragraphs

202 words

6.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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