Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

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Nowadays,
technology
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is an indispensable part of
people
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, it helps
people
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a lot in life.
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, the percentage of
children
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using electronics to play
games
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is very high.
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is beneficial as well as anyone for
children
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if they do not know how to control it properly. On the one hand, the world is developing rapidly,
technology
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is one of the ways to help
people
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access the outside world more easily.
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,
people
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increasingly cannot live without
technology
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. They spend a lot of
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using phones and computers.
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also
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helps them study as well as update the latest news in life.
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, they will take
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to play
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, which helps them relieve stress and recharge after tiring and busy days.
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, excessive use of
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and playing
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can
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make
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addicted to it. If
children
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use social networks as well as play online
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without family supervision,
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will easily fall into social evils
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as playing violent
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or reading inappropriate information. exactly.
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will greatly affect
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.
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, when my sister was young, she loved to play video
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and she often skipped school to go out. Especially serious is that she stole money from her
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to have money to go to video
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. After that, she was discovered and punished by her
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. From
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on, my
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spent more
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with her and controlled all the
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and information she read until she turned 18, aware and responsible for her own life. In conclusion, early exposure to electronics or social media is not bad. But
parents
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need to take the
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to control what their kids play or read so they don't go astray.
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