Some people believe that violence in the media, such as in television programs and films, directly results in violent behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the most trending stream in the world is
technology
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where a lot of students choose their career in
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and one of them is
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science
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of students choose
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science
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their future better,
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in the world
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over the internet and mostly everything
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on
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technology. Being a
computer
science
student and intern
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developer with considerable experience in
web
development
and
UI
/UX
design
. After working for a client during my internships and
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new experiences from that like Communication
skills
and Eternitech
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in client-side
web
development
, which became my prime motive to pursue
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in
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(
Web
development
and Mobile
development
). With
this
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along with
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skills
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responsive websites and
UI
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design
. My goal is to start a new career in
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Kingdom as a
Web
developer with the best figure and
also
want to build my own organisation in the same
field
to help people globally. I would
also
like to challenge myself in in upcoming years and
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closely with
this
advanced technology.
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roots of interest in
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of
web
development
since my high schooling days when I was more fascinated to solves mathematical
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and learning about programming languages like C and C++, it is true that I do not
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high school but I learning from myself on my own system. I
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skills
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that. Their implementation in real-life processes intrigued me a lot. I used to discuss my things with my offline and online friends who
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are interested in
this
field
. During my undergraduate degree in
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and deep insight
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web
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development
field
and User Interface and Experience
Design
by gaining my
skills
in programming languages like HTML,CSS,JAVASCRIPT and some frameworks like Bootstrap and open source Javascript library reacts and react-native. In
web
development
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development
is the most interesting area where we developed
design
things which are fully functional and responsive while fetching data from
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(Application Programming Interface),
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is because
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helps to make
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more
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better and responsive. Later, I
also
learn
UI
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design
with the help of Figma software
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better way.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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