you are studying and doing a part time job . A full time position recently opened in the company and your manager is asking you to quite your studies and start working full time. write a letter to him and say what is your decision? why did you make the decision? suggest a solution that will suit both you and the company.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter in response, where your suggestion to join the organisation as a full-time employee and drop the MBA course .
Firstly
, I am really thankful for offering me
this
opportunity , but I am afraid that I cannot accept
this
wonderful offer as of now. I would like to continue my
further
studies with my part-time job. To be honest, my aspiration is to be the HR in the finance department but the available position is for a senior product analyst.
However
,
This
could be a good experience in the same business domain but it won't add any experience for HR knowledge.
Furthermore
, I can refer one of my friends who has good experience and can join immediately our organisation . He could be my backup as well when I will take off for my Exam preparations. I have attached his curriculum vitae for reference. Please let me know if you require any
further
information Yours faithfully Pooja Raikwar
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