you are studying and doing a part time job . A full time position recently opened in the company and your manager is asking you to quite your studies and start working full time. write a letter to him and say what is your decision? why did you make the decision? suggest a solution that will suit both you and the company.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter in response, where your suggestion to join the organisation as a full-time employee and drop the MBA course .

Firstly

, I am really thankful for offering me

this

opportunity , but I am afraid that I cannot accept

this

wonderful offer as of now. I would like to continue my

further

studies with my part-time job. To be honest, my aspiration is to be the HR in the finance department but the available position is for a senior product analyst.

However

This

could be a good experience in the same business domain but it won't add any experience for HR knowledge.

Furthermore

, I can refer one of my friends who has good experience and can join immediately our organisation . He could be my backup as well when I will take off for my Exam preparations. I have attached his curriculum vitae for reference. Please let me know if you require any

further

information Yours faithfully Pooja Raikwar

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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