In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are spending more and more of their time indoors. What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could best be taken to solve it?

Generally, in recent times and in many countries around the world , we can clearly notice that the new

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children

and

teenager

spending much of their time isolated from the outdoors world. In

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the two methods that we can apply

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of tackling

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problem . My

first

and most important point is that the development of

technology

obtain a major negative impact on the new

children

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generation

.

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, my mom once told me that

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the period when she was growing up , the only way to have fun was to go out and play with her friends.

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nowadays the most common way for the new growing up

generation

is by playing video games , watching movies and spending time on social media platforms .So

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the indoor phenomenon that

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and

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suffer from .

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it is possible to solve

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hour limit

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using

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for each child and

teenager

,

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,one hour of

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every day and that will cause them to go outdoors more and more . My

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point is that the corona disease has a

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impact

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. On

children

and teenagers outdoors activities.Personally speaking as a

teenager

I stopped playing tennis due to the corona spreader disease .

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, we still can work on

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stop

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by encouraging

children

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to go back to

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outdoors activities that they used to do before the pandemic. To sum up , in my

opinion

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these are the main two

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for the indoor phenomenon in the new

generation

, and I would suggest to governments and schools to start

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applying the solutions that I suggested in

this

essay.