Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

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work jobs that they hate or are not skilful in.

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many problems with

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To begin

with, choosing the wrong or unsutble

job

could be so disturbing to the person working because they will be doing something they do not like or they are not good at it all their life.

In addition

, the person that chooses the wrong profession for himself, in a couple of years he will be rageret his whole life decisions.

For instance

, a guy who likes math and wants to be a teacher but only because he is good at biology became a doctor but he wanted to be a math teacher and he is now not too happy about his

job

or his work in general.

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, being not talented in your

job

is a very big problem because you can cause problems that can lead to something bigger than you expected.

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, a girl

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nursing should not enter it

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, her parents forced her to enter nursing because they think it is the best

job

there is. She ended up causing a lot of problems and

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involved in killing someone and got fired. In conclusion, A

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work jobs that they hate or are not skilful in.

This

always happens because sometimes

people

are attracted to the money the

job

gives or sometimes even because of parets.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

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