Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

We live in an age where many individuals are concerned about their private

life

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. There are people who believe that sharing their personal information

to

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the

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companies

while

applying for jobs is fruitful and there is a group who thinks that employers should not be asking for candidate's irrelevant information. In

this

essay, I will discuss both the point of view before reaching a reasonable conclusion. There are several reasons to support the statement "why the crowd thinks that the employee's confidential info is beneficial to take

while

applying for work".

Firstly

, to keep the workforce motivated and to make sure everybody in the company gives their 100% effort. Team leaders often throw appreciation parties and during these events, it has been noticed that using their

pesonal

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personal

information

employee's

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employees

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are gifted or treated

accordingly

. To cite an instance, we had a project completion party and the project manager was gifted with an amazing set of golf

kit

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as he was a district golf player and playing golf was his hobby. , employers use

this

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details in case of emergencies so that the correct

data

is

recieved

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received

on time to appropriate

personnels

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personnel

. On the other side, there is a school of thought

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considers sharing life's knowledge is of no use to employers and is completely useless.

To begin

with, there

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been lots of cases of

cyber crime

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cybercrime

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and

data

theft with

this

advancement in technology. People are scared to share their details as

this

makes them more exposed to

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a

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prey

of

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internet errors and majority of the businesses

keeps

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their

data

on platforms like

cloud

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.

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, recently it appeared on

news

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that a

well known

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association's

data

got hacked and all of their reports were stolen

such

as employee's banking and family facts.

Moreover

, in our

surroundings

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there are majority who are introverts and

likes

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to limit their lifestyles

within

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themselves.

Such

folks sometimes lose an opportunity because of not completing the steps in the job application. Taking everything into consideration, I would say that fetching one's info for work

purpose

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,

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is

benefical

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beneficial

for an individual

itself

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in keeping one safe from emergencies and

also

to keep

higherups

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informed about likes and dislikes.