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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In today's world, people often debate about the importance of subjects in school like
history
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,
science
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, and
technology
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. Some individuals are of the opinion that very few subjects are as important as
history
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 while others hold the view that
history
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 is not as important as
science
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 and
technology
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. In
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 and give an opinion. I, personally, side with the latter view.
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 with, the significance of
history
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 is not ignorable.
History
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 teaches us about ourselves. He studied depicts the development of our civilization along with other cultures and lifestyles. It is evidence that reveals the truth of our past and it
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 helps us to relate to our ancestors. As an example, when we, Bangladeshi people, learn about our liberation war, we can realize the sacrifices of our freedom fighters and
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 how we can comprehend the value of our independence.
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, now we are living in an age of
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, so we have to be cognitive in
science
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 and
technology
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 to keep pace with the current world. it is an undeniable fact that no one or no nation can achieve sustainable development without the knowledge of modern communication
technology
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. So students of his schools need to practice their knowledge of
science
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 and
technology
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.
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, today’s world is nothing but hugely dependent on data communication. That’s why a school student must learn about computers and their uses. so that he can be successful in his future career. In conclusion, every subject is equally important but some subject has a deep effect on us
history
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 is essential for us to know the row no logical development of the human race but to make a solid future we must depend on
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subject like
science
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 and
technology
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 mostly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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