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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Most people who were grown up in poverty or do not have a huge amount of
money
 will be more prepared to deal with financial
problems
 and
issues
 rather than a group of people who have a luxurious life. I hundred per cent agree with
this
 statement which
this
 essay will discuss.
To begin
 with,
children
 who are born in not a wealthy situation and atmosphere have a better understanding of financial
issues
, because their parents and family always have to deal with these types of
problems
 and
children
 in the home will learn from their guardians and their knowledge will increase about what issue should deal in future.
For example
, a family in a rental house has to always save
money
 for their rent, while if they have
children
, they will learn to always be aware of their
money
 and bills.
Thus
,
children
 will learn from their parent's behaviour and actions.
However
, the
children
 who grow up in wealthy families do not have any perspective of how
problems
 can be. It means, their parents always buy whatever they want and they do not talk about bills and
such
 things,
as a result
, their
children
 will never what
problems
 can happen if they do not have
money
.
For instance
, young
children
 which have a rich father are not worried about their future house or vehicle because they did not even think about it to find a way or work to make
money
 to reach their dreams.
Hence
, when parents do not talk about
money
 and financial
issues
 their
children
 will not have any concern or knowledge about those
problems
. To conclude,
children
 who were grown up in wealthy families and communities have no clues or perspective about financial
problems
 or
issues
such
 that,
however
,
on the other hand
 in poverty
children
 will learn what are the
problems
 and how they can deal with them.
Submitted by jaberi.mahyar on

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