You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

Dear Linda, As you know I have rented one of your
apartment
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at 2502 Millwoods road. I am afraid to tell you, I won't be able to move
next
month as I recently got an injury. I've been working in one of our branches in Vancouver.
Last
Friday, when I was leaving from the work I have fallen down
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the stairs. Due to
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my right ankle got fractured and as per
doctor's
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advice
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I am not able to walk or lift anything heavy. My pain was unbearable so I ended up putting
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However
, I took advice from my doctor and they told me total recovery will take about two months. So, I was wondering will we can move the advance amount to the deposit for May month. As I will be taking accommodation in Millwood after two months. I hope you will understand my circumstances and revert me back shortly. Thanks, Kanny
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