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some people think that the teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others beleive that teenagers should focus on the subject they are best or they are most interested are most interested in. To what extent do you agree?

#people #teenagers #subjects #school #beleive #focus
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 true that everyone has their own
subject
 of interest and an individual will more likely to prefer to learn
indepth
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in depth
in-depth
 in it. But in schooling
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 mostly in common that one should give equal concentration in all
subjects
, while some others tend to give more
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 to favourite
subject
 in their teen life. I strongly agree that in teenage, people should definitely learn all
subject
 in
same
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 way
of
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 one another in
this
eassay
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essay
. Learning all lessons
in
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higher
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a higher
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 level of schooling brings general
idea
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ideas
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 in all
discipline
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disciplines
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,which may eventually give them
confidence
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 to select their future studies with vast opportunities.
For
instance
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 in
India
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,India
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 a pupil
exceling
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excelling
 in his or her 10th grade
of
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apply
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examination requires to score more
marks
 in all
subject
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subjects
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 to choose their 11 th grade groups like CS maths, Bio maths, commerce etc. So the
marks
 scored in all
subjects
 and overall
marks
decides
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 his future grade.
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In addition
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In addition
,
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a pupil
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pupil
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pupils
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 in higher secondary level
also
 have to get good
marks
 in all
subjects
 apart from
favourite
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their favourite
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 one, because both overall
score
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scores
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as well as favourite stream
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 is calculated for college admission. If a student
get
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 ample
marks
 in his desired
subject
 and low
marks
 in other
subjects
 may end up getting
lack
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a lack
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 of eligibility to receive admission in college or his or her choice may be less would be
a
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 best sample. To conclude, the person in
tender
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the tender
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 should give equal importance to all
subjects
 in their young age to
succed
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succeed
 in their future life.
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