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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the socity .others ,however, belive that school is the place to learn this . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#people #parents #children #members #socity #belive #school #place
It is very crucial that our children grow up to be
an effective members
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 of
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society
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society
,while many people argue that it is their parent job ,
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believe
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belive
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believe
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 that
this
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role
 of the teachers . On the one hand ,its no doubt that parents play a vital
role
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children
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children's
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character
charcter
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 .most kids stay at home for many years before they are enrolled in
school
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this
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should
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 be taken advantage of and teach children some values .apperantly ,
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scientific
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 studies show that the way we act as
adult
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 is
largly
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largely
 based on how we were raised .and that most of our adult
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behaviour
 comes from whatever imposed on us in the
first
 five years .so parents should allocate a big portion of their life to build a good person.
On the other hand
 ,schools can
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paly
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 an
invitable
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inevitable
role
 in
this
 .
Firstly
,
student
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the student
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 spent a
lot
 of time in
school
 and
this
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undoubtedly
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undoubtedly
 have a tremendous effect on their personality by gaining a
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 their peers and teachers .
secondly
 schools is a perfect place to hold a
lot
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human
humen
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human
 development and what can a person bring to their
socity
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society
 .finaly teachers being parents themselves can implement a
lot
 of values and morals for
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 to be
abetter
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 version from their selves In my
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opinion
 , both
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caregivers
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care givers
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 and
school
personeal
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personnel
personal
 play a
role
 in raising a kid to be a fine member of
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socity
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society
city
 and have their own fingerprint . To conclude ,it takes both the family and the
school
 to raise a good generation .
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