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you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently come across an
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, published in your popular daily newspaper, which tried to shed some light on the looks of our town
centres
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 in our country. I am writing to thank you for the
article
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, and express my opinion on that. No doubt, it was rather well-written, and I do agree with most of the points that were presented in the
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.
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, I agree with the author when he says that the areas of most of the town
centres
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 have expanded over the years. I
also
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 agree with the fact that the number of parking spaces in and around the
city
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centres
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 has become relatively low.
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, I do not agree with the author when he claims that
city
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centres
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 in our country, pretty much, look the same.
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, my
city
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 centre looks different since it has managed to preserve many of its old buildings, unlike many other
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centres
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. But, if the author of the
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 does not believe what I am saying here about my
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 centre, I would be more than happy to give him a guided tour so that he can witness
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 fact and get some more insight about it. Yours faithfully, Morris Buchanon
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