Today’s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that children are under
extremely
Change the word
extreme
pressure
in todays'
life compared to young people in the past. The impending essay will discuss the same with a logical conclusion. The current competitive Change noun form
today's
labor
market has resulted in a drastic increase in the amount of Change the spelling
labour
pressure
from both schools and parents leading to enhanced stress levels particularly
among preadolescents and adolescents. Add the comma(s)
, particularly
This
has been evidenced by a recent study published by the University of Toronto concluding that over the past half a century, the number of Canadian teenagers suffering from anxiety and depression has increased by approximately 25%. The modern pace of scientific invention, innovation and discovery has contributed to a significant increase in the amount of efforts
required by the current generation of children to invest in learning the latest technological developments. Fix the agreement mistake
effort
As a result
, the modern child is confronted by the constant challenge of updating and upgrading their skills to keep up with these incessant changes. Based on a recent survey by the Science Weekly magazine, over the past quarter century, the pace of technological development especially in the field of computer science has doubled affecting the school curriculum and increasing the pressure
on students around the world. To concluce
, it is believed that Correct your spelling
conclude
past
young generation felt less Correct article usage
the past
pressure
compared to todays'
children.Change noun form
today's
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
