In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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is a big problem in many cities. From big cities to small
town
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overall globe the issue of
traffic
is
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. In
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we will be discussing some problem which causes the
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,
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on other hand we will be discussing some of the
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relevant

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solution
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of
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the cause. 
High
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volume of
traffic
could be rising up mainly because of
the
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apply

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two reasons.
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, increase in population as per records the numbers in
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particular

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are
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tend to be more as compared to
last
decades. For
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, in
one
family if there are five people
which
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means they will be having
average
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an average

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of two to three
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vehicles

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vehciles
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vehicles

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. More transportation in
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in
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causing more
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trafic
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. Following that
second
reason
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second
reason is poor emergency
services
.
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, according to
one
article
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the waiting time to
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to emergency
services
such
as road accidents is 10% more than other
services
.  Some
solution
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can be purposed to reduce the problem. New and
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stricted
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rules should have to be taken place.
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as
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even
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the even

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odd system which was purposed by
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. He suggested it will be
one
day for even
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plates and
one
day for odd license plates throughout the week.
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,
carpool
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carpooling

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is
most
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the most

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effective way to reduce
the
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traffic
. People in
large
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organization
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have to make
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carpooling a standard rule so not only they can
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engourage
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to
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reduce
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traffic
but
also
to
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reduce pollution.
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in
traffic
is
big
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a big

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threat to
globe
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. Mainly rise in population and poor emergency
services
are
drifting
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them to rise whereas, if we will take some
measurement
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into
the
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place we can reduce them by
adpating
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rules like carpooling and making new and strict rules.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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