Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Serious crimes need capital
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so that the {tooltip}offender{end-link}offenders{end-tooltip} are unable to get involved in the
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in the future.
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, {tooltip}If{end-link}if{end-tooltip} they want to stop the acts of violation in the future
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it would be better to {tooltip}forget him and judge him for a change{end-link}a confusing expression{end-tooltip} . Overall, I agree with the fact that
punishment
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is the
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to avoid the {tooltip}
crime
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to be increased{end-link}increase in
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rate{end-tooltip} and
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our lives become more secure. If the wrongdoer wants to be a good {tooltip}man{end-link}person{end-tooltip} and there is a particular financial or personal problem that led him to the wrong
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,
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it would be
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nice option to forgive him and try to solve the problem he {tooltip}have{end-link}has{end-tooltip}.
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by
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way
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, some bad {tooltip}man{end-link}people{end-tooltip} may become effective {tooltip}part{end-link}members{end-tooltip} of the society but some do not bring themselves to the right path because they are {tooltip}very much used to of it{end-link}incorrect unclear expression{end-tooltip}. The person that {tooltip}_{end-link}"is" was missing here{end-tooltip} involved in the
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and never {tooltip}try{end-link}tries{end-tooltip} to stop the law-breaking act should be punished in {tooltip}the{end-link}an{end-tooltip} extremely serious
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.
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, it totally depends on the nature of
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. Some {tooltip}
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led{end-link}crimes lead{end-tooltip} to a capital
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and some may require a small penalty. The law-making institutions are responsible to bring the bad man to the right level of
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that he deserves. If there is weak legislation to properly handle the offender, {tooltip}become our society less secure{end-link}mean that our society becomes less secure{end-tooltip} for the good {tooltip}man{end-link}people{end-tooltip}. The government should be the responsible authority to provide a secure and better state to live
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Laws should be implemented and executed in the most proper
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that {tooltip}do{end-link}does{end-tooltip} not allow the offender to commit violent acts or to break the law in any
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and to any extent. To sum up, it is the responsibility of the state {tooltip}runner{end-link}remove, not necessary{end-tooltip} to stop people {tooltip}to{end-link}from getting{end-tooltip} involved in
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. It may be done through solving the problems of the people that led them to commit that {tooltip}violence{end-link}violent{end-tooltip} act or by the
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accordingly
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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