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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to their sport activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree or disagree?

#universities #amount #money #sport #activities #libraries
Yes, I do feel that
universities
 should have an equal budget for their libraries as well as {tooltip}_{end-link}for{end-tooltip}
sport
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activities
. It is our general belief that a good player can not be {tooltip}_{end-link}"a" is missing here{end-tooltip} good student and
hence
 we restrict our children’s
sport
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activities
 at
college
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the college
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 level.
Moreover
, an academic degree has much more value than
sport
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activities
 which naturally compels students to focus more on their studies than
their
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 interest in
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the sport
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sport
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. Most of the
universities
 keep sports at {tooltip}
last
 number{end-link}the bottom{end-tooltip} of their priority list, {tooltip}because of which{end-link}
therefore
{end-tooltip} good players do not get enough facilities and {tooltip}equipments{end-link}equipment, because it is an uncountable noun{end-tooltip} to improve their skills and eventually they {tooltip}loose{end-link}lose{end-tooltip} their interest.
Universities
 can play {tooltip}_{end-link}"a" is missing here{end-tooltip} substantial role in shaping
this
 upcoming talent by providing good trainers and {tooltip}
equipments
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equipment
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{end-link}equipment
,
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 because it is an uncountable noun{end-tooltip} which is
otherwise
 too expensive to afford.
Also
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 it will attract other students {tooltip}towards{end-link}to{end-tooltip} sports and inculcate
importance
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the importance
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 of physical fitness in them.
Universities
 should produce {tooltip}genious{end-link}geniuses{end-tooltip} in all fields rather than only concentrating on
progress
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the progress
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 of scholars.
Hence
, I feel that
universities
 should allot equal amounts of money to {tooltip}liabrary{end-link}libraries{end-tooltip} as well as
sport
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activities
.
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