Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear Sir or Madam, The reason for

this

letter is to make my apport on the

oustanding

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outstanding

characters of our community and their positive social impact.

Therefore

, I am obligated to mention someone who is considered an emblematic helper during the

uncertant

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uncertainty

times we have been thought. Mark Thompson, the Fireman director from the fire local department, is a remarkable citizen who

exceed

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in any task he is involved

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his

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role

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but

because

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his humbled heart and compassion for those in need.

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, he was an active rescue member in the

bush fires

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we had

last

year.

Besides

, he's the formal trainer to the volunteers in the program "Let's preserve our planet by leaving a green footprint"; which advocates

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enviromental

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environmental

-friendly with our

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daily

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daily

actions. As

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incredible value to our

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, it's well known his desire to

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an annual event where children and parents plant trees that represents his values. In

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with that,

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economical resources to his plan and

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the event

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"The Thompson's day" would be a noble action to prize his attitude. I kindly ask you to take

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count my opinion regarding

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human being. Yours Faithfully, Natali Burgio

Submitted by nataliburgio on Fri Sep 23 2022

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0Word repetition
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21Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

203 words

6.00

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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