Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Sir or Madam, The reason for
this
letter is to make my apport on the
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outstanding
characters of our community and their positive social impact.
Therefore
, I am obligated to mention someone who is considered an emblematic helper during the
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times we have been thought. Mark Thompson, the Fireman director from the fire local department, is a remarkable citizen who
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in any task he is involved
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Not only because
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role
,
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but
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his humbled heart and compassion for those in need.
For instance
, he was an active rescue member in the
bush fires
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we had
last
year.
Besides
, he's the formal trainer to the volunteers in the program "Let's preserve our planet by leaving a green footprint"; which advocates
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enviromental
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environmental
-friendly with our
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daily
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daily
actions. As
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incredible value to our
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, it's well known his desire to
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an annual event where children and parents plant trees that represents his values. In
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with that,
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economical resources to his plan and
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the event
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"The Thompson's day" would be a noble action to prize his attitude. I kindly ask you to take
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count my opinion regarding
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human being. Yours Faithfully, Natali Burgio
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