Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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opinion to reduce
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prison
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can decrease
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you become a prisoner. The important thing to teach people
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know
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is education. People can learn from school and
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with
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, it is their job to teach them. Which behaviour they can do and
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do in
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and what is
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they will get if they have done wrong
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right
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or discuss
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them as well to know what are they thinking while watching live
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from school is primary as well.
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must
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teach them etic and legislation in college to help them
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why
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is important in our
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and what punishment
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you do
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wrong against
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, every college has
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all students must
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read
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carefully and no one cannot excuse
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they do not know the rule.
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the other
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the
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the best
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crime
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from what they
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and family. In part of
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after you have done
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it and will not do
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after you release from
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this
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that you will not do
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again. In conclusion,
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main reason to reduce
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thing that parents and
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Furthermore
, providing longer
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do, some of them should not have a chance to
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